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 - I love learning about computers. Everything from how they work, to new languages, to new ways to use them (I even learned a bit of WGSL and WGPU to make the shader in the background\*)
 - I love looking for problems to solve, and working with people to solve them
-- As a Boy Scout at heart, I love camping, hiking, backpacking, and just the outdoors generally
-- I'm a loyal friend who will be there for you through thick and thin
+- I balance the time I spend at my computer with outdoor activities like, camping, hiking, and backpacking
 - I know how to both write code for computers, as well as whip them into shape when they start having problems. I am the IT guy in my family
 
 \*Special thanks to _meico_ from Shadertoy for the GLSL version of your Spectrum Ring shader